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Coati Like Melon

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
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*ahem* I think someone has conquered his kitty cat tendencies! My crit would be... the hands. They look more like a gorilla's mits than a coati's. Granted it is a toony type but you have coati type feet and then the hands look really bulky compared to the feet. I'd thin out the fingers quite a bit and with the hands...hmm I dunno how to explain what i want. I shall try. XD
It kind of looks like his toes are just broken and flopped over right now rather than balled up in a fist, you should make some knuckles or something visible and bring the lines up to the top of the finger or something. [link] Check this ref.
I hope that makes sense.
I think how you did the hind feet is pretty darn snazzy thar. I like that hair the mellon has, you should give him a face... he can be MacGuyver Mellon and try to find a way out of the situation using only a used wad of gum and string...woah wait where am I going now with this crit?
I like the expression you put on his face too by the way. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />